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|Today's winner for sentence containing the most possible wrong: Oliver returned to Starling City, only to find out he was pregnant, by Slade no less. Fanfic, why do you do this to me? WHY!!!
Hahaha! Who're Oliver and Slade, and where are they from?
|Date:||November 14th, 2013 07:31 pm (UTC)|| |
Given the locale and names, it's probably Arrow fanfic. Not that I've bothered watching the Green Arrow TV show, Smallville pretty much maxed me out on live-action DC Comics shows.
Yep. It's so... earnestly yet badly written. (To clarify, that's regarding the fanfic, not the show. Because that needs clarifying.) The main character runs around shirtless rather a lot and this is a substantial portion of the show's charm. Damn, he is a fine-looking thing.
Do note that the wrongness is largely in execution, not in concept. I am not in love with mpreg fic but it's not a dealbreaker. The actual problem here is that subordinate clause mess and the utterly clunky phrasing it contains.