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November 14th, 2013
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Today's winner for sentence containing the most possible wrong: Oliver returned to Starling City, only to find out he was pregnant, by Slade no less. Fanfic, why do you do this to me? WHY!!!

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From:not_your_real
Date:November 14th, 2013 06:30 pm (UTC)
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Hahaha! Who're Oliver and Slade, and where are they from?
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From:fooliv
Date:November 14th, 2013 07:31 pm (UTC)
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Given the locale and names, it's probably Arrow fanfic. Not that I've bothered watching the Green Arrow TV show, Smallville pretty much maxed me out on live-action DC Comics shows.
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From:which_chick
Date:November 15th, 2013 12:55 pm (UTC)
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Yep. It's so... earnestly yet badly written. (To clarify, that's regarding the fanfic, not the show. Because that needs clarifying.) The main character runs around shirtless rather a lot and this is a substantial portion of the show's charm. Damn, he is a fine-looking thing.
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From:which_chick
Date:November 15th, 2013 12:58 pm (UTC)
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Do note that the wrongness is largely in execution, not in concept. I am not in love with mpreg fic but it's not a dealbreaker. The actual problem here is that subordinate clause mess and the utterly clunky phrasing it contains.
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